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First off, this newspaper has potential, but is it a cross between the Onion and the Tribune? That’s not going to last long.
What’s good is that it’s short and to the point, but not everyone shops at Urban Outfitters, drinks Cosmos and listens to hip-hop 24-seven. That’s who I feel this paper is targeting.
A few suggestions: get a REAL sports section and put it at the back, expand the business/money section, make the articles a little more in-depth and get a crossword.
If you don’t make radical changes, this thing is gone by the New Year.
